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GWR Cornwall London CheltenhamI love these GWR posters from the 30s and 40s.

The illustrations are beautiful, the type clean, clear and simple. They offer little snapshots of a bygone age when train travel was romantic and exciting – steam filled platforms with glamorous women melting into the arms of stoic men dressed in overcoats and trilbys.

Here’s the modern equivalent, taken from Penzance station earlier in the year:

 2012 advertising campaign
I know that designers in the 1930s had fewer constraints than today. I know that there weren’t many other options than to travel by train so they were free to focus on selling the destinations by producing lovely illustrations. I understand that it was a simpler time with less competition, less restriction and less at stake.

Even so, did the current posters have to be quite so awful?

Firstly, there’s the floating pronoun. Who’s him? Because it’s the most prominent thing in the ad, I immediately assumed it was the fish – it took me a while before I noticed the silhouette of the boy.

Maybe I was being a little slow after a long train journey but that’s not the point. These posters are meant to be instant enough to leave you in no doubt what the message is, even when glimpsed momentarily from a moving train window. If you need to stand in front of the ad and re-read it over and over, it isn’t doing its job properly.

Here are some 1930s posters for the GWR services to Bristol:

GWR BristolBack then, the city was represented by the Clifton Suspension Bridge, ornate architecture and the grand entrance to the cathedral. In the 2012 ad, Bristol is represented by a big blue fish.

Why? Is the city underwater? Is the Giant Wrasse the national symbol of Somerset and Avon?

I don’t live there so I’m assuming that Bristol has an aquarium. As a train user and potential traveller to the city, I’m part of the ad’s target market – I shouldn’t have to assume anything.

Finally there’s the statement: ‘I’m just the guy who feeds the goldfish’. It’s a sad line, very poignant. I imagine it being said by a father who’s lost touch with his son. Perhaps he’s never there to play football with the boy because he’s working too many hours at the office in order to afford train fares.

But, if all you are to your son is the person who looks after the pet, if you’re less important to him than his goldfish, I’d suggest that there are some significant issues that need to be addressed – the sort of issues that can’t be solved by a simple day-trip to Bristol.

If the old GWR posters are evocative of the 1930s, I hate to think what the current ads say about us as a society in 2012. According to them, we’re muddled, vague and disconnected from the people around us.

Mark

Further to our post last year about banned words, I thought I’d share something I found at my parents’ home this Christmas.

It shows that stockpiles of impressive sounding yet ultimately meaningless words have been around for a while – and they’re certainly not limited to the creative industry. This sheet was circulated in the research labs of British Steel in the 1970s:

Jargon Zammerchat

TRANSCRIPT:


BSC Special Steels

Management Training Centre
Brookfield Manor

Instant Random Jargon Generator

Technology has created a new type of jargon that is nearly as incomprehensible as it is sophisticated. We recently came across an unusual technique called an Instant Random Jargon Generator, which will help you master this jargon. With it, you can generate an almost endless variety of intelligent-sounding technical terms.

The technique is easy to use. Merely select a digit from each of the three columns below and combine the words opposite each number into your own technical jargon. For example, select ‘3’, ‘9’, and ‘0’ and you generate ‘Parallel policy options’,’ an expression bound to command instant respect – and confusion.

MORAL: Watch your language

COLUMN 1
0.  integrated

1.  total
2.  systematized
3.  parallel
4.  functional
5.  responsive
6.  optical
7.  synchronized
8.  compatible
9.  balanced

COLUMN 2
0.  management
1.  organizational
2.  monitored
3.  reciprocal
4.  digital
5.  logic
6.  transitional
7.  incremental
8.  third-generation
9.  policy
10. quality (handwritten)

COLUMN 3
0.  options
1.  flexibility
2.  capability
3.  mobility
4.  programming
5.  concept
6.  time-phase
7.  projection
8.  hardware
9.  contingency
10. performance (handwritten)

Mark

Welcome to our new website. We hope you like it.

We’ve spent a while developing the look and feel of it, even longer coming up with the content. We’re used to writing for other people but when it comes to writing about ourselves…

How exactly do you pin down what it is that you do? What words do you use to define yourself? There’s a lot of pressure when your website is your shop-window – how do you convince someone that you know what you’re doing without coming across smug or cocky or desperate?

Like any creative profession, much of our work is born out of experience and instinct, which can be difficult to articulate. It’s incredibly easy to fall back on jargon and cliché. In our industry there are certain words that are bandied about so frequently that all their meaning has been worn away. Here are a few:

Integrated
Juxtaposition
Innovation-led
Solutions
Forward-thinking
Passionate
Holistic
One-stop-shop
Fusing
Paradigm
Bespoke
Real-time
Platform
Redefining
Pro-active

Once you’ve got a stockpile of these impressive sounding words, it’s easy to link a few of them together to form sentences:

Zammerchat is an innovation-led agency offering a bespoke, fully integrated service to redefine the paradigms of your business.

or

We are passionate about providing holistic, forward-thinking solutions to ensure that your company is pro-active across real-time platforms.

A phrase like that might fill the tricky ‘about us’ section, but what does it actually mean?

These types of ready-made phrases show that you haven’t searched hard enough for the right words – they’re quick, easy, vague and ultimately lazy. By using them you might save yourself some mental anguish but you sacrifice precision and clarity.

Words should be picked for their meaning and imagery should be used to enhance that meaning. It’s not enough to say that you’re ‘innovation-led’ or that you offer ‘bespoke solutions’ – if you’re putting yourself forward as a creative agency, these things should be pretty obvious already.

In writing this website we made every effort to ensure that we were thinking clearly about who we are and what we do. That’s why, when we were writing this site, we banned every word on the above list.

If you happen to spot one we’ve missed or you come across any other hackneyed turn of phrase that gets on your nerves, please let us know. We’ll add it to our list.

Mark

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